Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
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Menzo wrote:Lmao, you gotta love Zabe / SG...guy's so underrated.
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Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
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so back - hook was sick except for last line, no rhyming end made it sound off. ax should sing on all the hooks too, no offence kezzy but he just has a better mic. presence for that type of hook. rest of the song was pretty good except i think the quality could be better, good flows and lyrics though.
wandering stars - sick sample, the beat is crazy dope. ax your flow on this was great, i think your vocals should be a bit louder though, but that's just me. kez your verse was perfect on this one, perfect tempo for your accent.
killer - not really feeling this beat and the hook is garbage, sorry to be blunt. subject matter is okay, can't really hate 'cause we've all made these types of tracks but i'm kind of past these types for me personally 'cause none of us are actually killing people. okay song.
havana blvd. - not really feeling the singing on this but the rapping flows are pretty nice, easy on the ears unlike the intro. who's the girl, is it a sample? pretty good.
kings & superstars - perfect track, tempo, beat, flows, lyrics, delivery and pronunciation was great. no complaints except i feel kezzy's shit could be a tad louder.
set me free - now this is some shit, coming in HARD. beat is fucking sick, verses are fire, flows are great, on some real lyrical shit. this is the type of tracks you guys should be concentrating on.
hate us again - funny how you joke about the bad quality 'cause this track is lacking on that compared to the others. other than that it's pretty good, sounds like some other songs you've done but nonetheless it's a good song. rhyme scheme's are nice. hook is nice!
feels so great - meh, not really feeling this song. verses are good but the hook kind of throws me off and the beat is just alright. didn't really grab my attention.
the return - i like the rhyme schemes on this one, lyrics are on point. beat is nice and up beat, i like the tempo too. ax's verse was sick, i preferred his on this one. also i feel ax's verse was a bit more clean than kezzy's, vocal wise.
our house - best track on the cd yet by far, you guys kill it. tom's verse was good but the delivery was kind of lacking on it, he sounds bored while you 2 sound energized as fuck which kind of brings it down for me. lyrically though this is a banger. beat is awesome too.
full of myself - singing was alright on this, i actually dig it. i like this type of track, nice and mellow, one of the better one's on this tape. you guys sound nice and relaxed on this which makes it stand out so much more. fuck the last track, this is the best one thus far for my liking.
rise from the ashez - good filler track, nice and short, good to wind the cd down. lyrics are tight, flow is nice kez, good stuff.
my world 3 - reminds me of my tick-tock song, the beat. you guys ride this one nicely, hard to say something without sounding repetitive at this point but everything is dope on this track from lyrics to flow to delivery and pronunciation.
lost ones - fuck this track is awesome. damn ax, you go crazy on your verse what a sick flow! kez you did great too but sorry ax just killlledddddd this track, one of the best i've heard from you guys. really impressive.
killer - not really feeling this beat and the hook is garbage, sorry to be blunt. subject matter is okay, can't really hate 'cause we've all made these types of tracks but i'm kind of past these types for me personally 'cause none of us are actually killing people. okay song.
rise from the ashez - good filler track, nice and short, good to wind the cd down. lyrics are tight, flow is nice kez, good stuff.
Let's link up for a collab for the next tape!
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
1. So Back
Okay first off, love the beat, the first time i listened to it i didn't really like it that much but it has grown on me every listen. Ax-D i liked both of your verses, but in my opinion Kez outshined you a little on this track, your first verse was better than your second imo. Your flow and delivery were on spot and your quality is heaven to the ears lol. Kez your verses are on fire, i liked your second verse more than your first "Can't get rid of this, sick lyrical syphilis" - Sick! The hook is simple but catchy which is good! This song is a great opener, the only thing i find a little off with the track is the last hook where you and kez go back and forth, it sounds a little off because of the quality difference but that dosn't matter really.
2. Wandering Stars
Fucking love the beat and the sample! Thats some classic shit rite there. Ax your verse is good, very nice flow, rode the beat like it was your bitch. The only thing is that your vocals seem a little to low for me, but other than that hard hitting verse! Same goes to you aswell Kez, except your vocals are the rite volume. Very dope song, defiantly going to be playing this way down the road!.
3. Killer
Fuck.. “I’ve always wanted to do this to you, i just never had the guts to do it but i finally do” Great opening lines, and i love how your voice sounds dark and deep, really made your verse stand out better. The hook is a little different, i was expecting some kinda dark hook but it works, at first i didn’t really like it, but it has grown on me over a couple of listens. Kez, your verse was sick “karlma was to lazy to do its job, so ill take it into my own hands” fucking sick opening line. Both of you guys went in on this track, i loved both of your verses and i liked your little bridge Ax-D.
4. Havana Blvd.
Finally Kez starts off with the first verse :P lol! Sick beat. At first I didn’t really know what i thought of this track, but after more and more listens it grew on me allot. I loved it mostly because of its different sound from everything, great use of the sample. You guys rip the shit up, spot on flows, lyrics and delivery!
5. Kings & Superstars
You guys defiantly have a good chemistry, this song is completely sick. The beat is very dope and the back and forth motion in both of the verses is great! I liked the concept of this track, both of you guys executed this track! I like everything about this track, the only thing i can really complain about is it being a little short but the track still stands strong at the length it is.
6. Set Me Free
(Already left feed on this song)
7. Hate Us Again
I guess there is no downfall in this album, every song has been fire (including this one). Really loving the beat, Ax you have grown really well as a producer, all these beats are sounding really professional and are all banging! I love this song, the only thing i find out of place is the “hate us again” when you guys weren’t hated just like FreeDoom, other than that this is a very solid song!.
8. Feel So Great
Ax you started your verse off with a pretty good line “I must of been deaf cause the afterlife’s coming”, your verse was really enjoyable. Kez you came in with a solid verse aswell, i wasn’t really feeling the hook but the verses made me forget about the hook. There is nothing that i don’t like about this track, its perfect.
9. The Return
The beat is sick, Scrubz is a really good producer! The hook is pretty dope, just at the start of the hook your delivery Kez sounds a little boring, like you had no motivation, but it slowly picked up as the hook went on. Kez your verse’s was solid, the only thing i can criticize are your ad-libs on your first verse Kez, i don’t know what it is but they don’t really fit in there for me. Ax your verse was solid aswell, at the start i was a little sceptical on your delivery, not sure if i liked it or not but its different lol. I didn’t really like the bit when the coughing and shit came in, i reckon that it should’ve been turned down a little more because it made it kind of hard to hear what you were rapping.
10. Our House
Kez you came in with a great verse, you sounded hungry, i liked the nuke line. Your vocals sounded low to me, but thats all i can criticize about your verse. Ax i loved the hook, catchy shit. Your verse was solid, I laughed at the “eat my facieses (mmm this is great) lmfao! One thing i found odd was the flow on the last couple of words of your verse fell off and didnt really sound good, but other than fire. Tom im not really a fan of your delivery on this track, you sound kinda bored compared to the delivery of Kez and Ax. Though i did like your lyrics and flow, it just would’ve been better if your delivery was better.
11. Full of Myself
Really smooth beat rite here, simple but great! Ax i fucking LOVE the hook, really smooth just one layer of vocals and the lyrics are great! Lol! Kez i haven’t listened much of you other than this cd and one or two other songs so i was kinda sceptical on how you would approach this track, since there isn’t a track like this that ive heard by you, but you done good! “love myself so much i almost get an erection” lmfao! Ax you killed this shit! I love the concept of this track .
12. Rise From The Ashez
Nice beat, simple but it works! I liked the hook and Kez ripped it up but I wished that you had a verse on this Ax, but I do understand the use of this track. As Steve said nice filler track, and a good winding down track and it worked.
13. My World III
Holy shit! Great closing track (Well if you don’t count the hidden track as a closer), when I first listened to it and I heard the intro I didn’t know where the track was going, then the hook and verses kicked in and I was like :O To be honest this is my favourite track on the album, I can really feel what Kez is talking about, very good concept! “This world is fucked up, hatred and anger, this world is consumed by racists and bastards, why is it that I just cannot live my world” FUCKING GREAT hook! I loved the little bridge, Ax you made me laugh at the “I want to kiss myself” then Kez comes in with the dark shit with “I hate myself, I want to kill myself” Ax-D you came in with a great verse! Loved it!.
14. Lost Ones
Fuck............ the flows are fucking insane on this shit! Especially yours Ax-d, perfected that shit. The only thing is is that this track shoulda been a bit longer, like I would’ve loved if you guys did a back and forth verse, but I can’t complain. 2 minutes and 21 seconds of pure fire!
Ax you made me laugh at the “I want to kiss myself” then Kez comes in with the dark shit with “I hate myself, I want to kill myself” Ax-D you came in with a great verse! Loved it!.
I wish that there were more deep tracks on here but awell.
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