C.R.E.A.M VRS ZUL[up for votes]

by **shadyfreakzul** » Jul 29th, '11, 22:59

I'll lash-you-quick and blast-you-with punches that’ll have-you-quit
win me? you cant-do-it cuz like an overused and outstretched ‘pussy’ this ‘cat’-too weak//
cuz am about to wreck one*raekwon* fool if he thinks he’s a lyric-"chef"
no placing money on this cuz crushing CREAM is just like labour with no pain..an easy birth*bet*
Got beaten by IQ*Eye Q* shows you’re a dumb-fella..cuz
Cream had sex with the greek alphabet just because he wanted to fuck-better*beta*
Your rap has more flaws*floors* than skyscrapers and your flow smells like stinking-armpit
So you only drop "bars" when you quit your bad drinking-habit
CREAM a "G.O.A.T"? he must be Kidding…his "joints" wont even fetch him "money"
Cuz the only time CREAM is relevant is when girls apply him on their body

line 5 EYE Q won him
Line 10 nameplay on his name...its also a personal...

i dont think i have to explain the punches and wordplay.....i guess y'all are dope heads

by **shadyfreakzul** » Jul 29th, '11, 23:09

C.R.E.A.M wrote:Great verse, i'll deliver tomorrow.

lol thats like feeding on my verse..no p i'll be waiting

by **Sam.** » Jul 30th, '11, 11:22

damn ! that was some dope shit bruh .

by **shadyfreakzul** » Jul 30th, '11, 11:47

MCSam wrote::worship: damn ! that was some dope shit bruh .

thanks man

by **shadyfreakzul** » Jul 30th, '11, 16:55

C.R.E.A.M wrote:
MCSam wrote::worship: damn ! that was some dope shit bruh .

Hold on ...

dude am still waiting..it sucks to drop a verse only for your opponent not to drop

by **Suicide** » Jul 30th, '11, 17:10

shadyfreakzul wrote:
C.R.E.A.M wrote:
MCSam wrote::worship: damn ! that was some dope shit bruh .

Hold on ...

dude am still waiting..it sucks to drop a verse only for your opponent not to drop

Don't worry. Cream will drop. Guess I'll come back to vote whenever he does.

Good verse btw. :y:

by **shadyfreakzul** » Jul 30th, '11, 18:26

thanks man

by **shadyfreakzul** » Jul 30th, '11, 23:54

WTF...CREAM AM STILL WAITING

by **shadyfreakzul** » Jul 31st, '11, 00:33

C.R.E.A.M wrote:Sorry i'm late lawl, couldn't really post my verse cuz I was out all day.

aite we cool...now we waiting for the votes

by **Suicide** » Jul 31st, '11, 20:01

(3) Punchlines- ZUL. I laughed at the last line.
(3) Personals- CREAM.
(2) Multies- ZUL.
(1) Flow- CREAM's flowed more smoothly.
(1) Structure- CREAM.
(1) Vocab/Complex- CREAM due to the Zul lines.
(1) Other- N/A

6-5 for Cream.

by **Drug.Ballad** » Jul 31st, '11, 21:23

(3) Punchlines - Zul
(3) Personals - Tie
(2) Multies - Zul
(1) Flow - Cream
(1) Structure - Tie
(1) Vocab/Complex - Cream
(1) Other - N/A

5-2 to Zul.

:y:

by **shadyfreakzul** » Jul 31st, '11, 21:54

thanks for the votes....1-1

by **Devil'sAdvocate** » Jul 31st, '11, 22:19

wont break this down but my vote goes to cream.

yo CREAM,i will battle you if we switch one thing up for the votes

rhyming gets 3,punches get 2,cuz nikka i got them schemes written B!

by **Devil'sAdvocate** » Jul 31st, '11, 22:53

yes,give me 3 days and i will PM my verse to sam

bring yo hardest shit,aint no hard feeling b!

by **Spyder** » Aug 7th, '11, 05:38

punches - Zul
personals - ehhh Zul
multies - Cream
Flow - Cream
structure - Zul
vocab - NA
Other - NA

7-3 Zul

ZUl alot of your words dont rhyme that well, i know you prob got an accent so thats prob the case but it threw off the flow really bad for me, mroe than Creams structure. which Cream as i said before gotta work on

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