Hey guys, interested in a collab? 6/6~8 -3 days left-

[SG.]

No problem, it's less work.

[J.R.]

No problem, it's less work.

[SG.]

Can you put some feedback on mine, seeing as you've read it? Just looking to see what I need to improve.

[Man1x]

Whens the dead line for my verse?

[J.R.]

Can you put some feedback on mine, seeing as you've read it? Just looking to see what I need to improve.

YEah, feed this in return?

@Eminememy, Isn't one at the moment, track won't be sent out til September 5th.

[Man1x]

Can you put some feedback on mine, seeing as you've read it? Just looking to see what I need to improve.

YEah, feed this in return?

@Eminememy, Isn't one at the moment, track won't be sent out til September 5th.

Oh, that's cool. Just to warn you this is my first time writing to a beat. I'll give it my all but I understand if you want to pull me off. But if you don't I'll give it my all

@Zabe, I'm gonna feed you and, if you want and if B. Nutz allows it, I'll do a duo on the chorus cause I kinda have an idea. All up you, don't make up your minds until the tracks sent out though, cause if it doesn't fit the beat it'll look trashy.

[Blu]

Name: Blu
Link to piece: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=118064&hilit=+depression
How active are you? Pretty active, d00d.

[J.R.]

Okay,you guys can dual the chorus. Info on the track coming sept 5th.

Blu, In.

[Suicide]

Subject:
Overcoming obstacles and getting better at rapping
16 bars min, 24 bar limit.

Don't start work til all are in, 1 more tho.

16 bars as in 32 lines? Or 16 bars as in 16 lines?

Just trying to clarify, coz this usually confuses some people. I'm guessing it was the first and not the latter?

[J.R.]

Subject:
Overcoming obstacles and getting better at rapping
16 bars min, 24 bar limit.

Don't start work til all are in, 1 more tho.

16 bars as in 32 lines? Or 16 bars as in 16 lines?

Just trying to clarify, coz this usually confuses some people. I'm guessing it was the first and not the latter?

16 lines. There's 6-8 of us, so yeah. Needs to be kept lines.

[SG.]

How long do you want the chorus? 4 lines or 8?

[J.R.]

How long do you want the chorus? 4 lines or 8?

4.

[Matt Holck]

looks covered

do i need to write to this or can i go?

[Matt Holck]

well I said I would

so here's a four line chorus

let me know if you need more
or if these will work

step over cracks with kept rhythm track
stop to step back to correct the list tack
gonna take a while when I make a half mile
switching up styles to finish that trial

so they fall when they stall at the great wall of China
smashing dishes making messes like bleeding vaginas