[LEAGUE] TRIMSS - MAN1X (Open)

[B.A.D.]

TRIMSS
At night lurkin' on some forums to get pictures of me,*1
Surfin' through his boredom, a cigarette, a mixure of weed
Took it literally when Nas talked about a book of rhyme,
I'm like who's this guy, why does he stick to a sheet
stop rap, and start writing novels bitch you're a freak
Menzo's, Geno's, or mine, which dick would you eat?
If this dickhead thinks he's gonna win, he's on one
How can I take you serious when Manix means condom! *
you're done hun, talking about maths? you really ain't sane!
Geno used pie to beat you cuz it's easy as cake,
Acting like you can own me, it's silly and fake
Do your prayers because i'm Sealin' your fate
This ain't a battle fag, read it bitch, this is war
How would you want to eat the dick, cuz my diss is raw
the shit is on, you wrote a wack diss and you loved it
I know it's so dumb, even Blu would've mocked it

MAN1X
I might lose to this menace, but just muse in this vengeance
I'm using these wrenches to bruise your defenses
You'll be mute in repentance when you lose in ascension
You'll fume for acceptance, like a fag you are rejected
So why you against gays, you both got so much in common
I aim to cause immense pain when told to go bust out ball pens
To verify my claims, the proof is in your mental course
"Oh, since real life failed, time to join an internet talk forum"
Okay, we know Geno dissed this weak flow weeks 'go
Please though, keep those weak quotes alone like Atone bro
Besides, your best work makes me think you learned from Benzino
Deny this, then you got enough skill and nerve to join Ego
Your boring as fuck, my words are a deep bending scary fable
My last track was IV, I'm the independent variable
I affect your actions and cause accidents that are tragic
Whenever I splash spit you must think magic had just happened

[Man1x]

Damn Trimss haha

[Trimss]

I came off pretty weak lmao.

By the way, this is for the condom line.

[Man1x]

I came off pretty weak lmao.

By the way, this is for the condom line.

I don't see it?

Anyway my wrench line in the beginning is about how I lost to Geno but the wrench, being a tool that can fix things, is being used to bring you down and hurt you. I just ha to explain that and the one about gays. I based that off you being homophobic.

[Mr.DGAF]

(30) Personals ----------Trimss 15 Man1x 5
(20) Punchlines ---------Trimss 10 Man1x 5
(20) Technique ---------Trimss 15 Man1x 15
(10) Flow -----------------Trimss 10 Man1x 10
(10) Structure -----------Trimss 10 Man1x 10
(10) Vocab/Complex ---Trimss 5 Man1x 10

Trimss 65
Man1x 55

Man1x almost guaranteed he would win the vocab in the first two bars haha. Besides that though, I didn't really see much in your verse that hit hard. It just wasn't a good battle verse, there were some vague shots thrown in there, but they were generally the kind of stuff you'd see in many other battles. Nothing that really sticks out or any personals.

Trimss had one line that almost single handedly won, and it was the "easy as cake" line. Had a pretty good name flip too. It was a pretty decent verse, but the two lines I mentioned are the reasons why you won this battle.

[Man1x]

I'm not a battle MC I guess haha, I'll just have to study some great battle verses then

[Man1x]

Thanks for the vote Geno.

[Trimss]

Man1x, all you needed were better personals because the vocabulary and rhymes were crazy.

[Man1x]

(30) Personals | Trimss=25/Man1x=10
(20) Punchlines | Trimss=15/Man1x=18
(20) Technique | Trimss=10/Man1x=20
(10) Flow | Trimss=5/Man1x=10
(10) Structure | Trimss=5/Man1x=10
(10) Vocab/Complex | Trimss=5/Man1x=10

Man1x = 78
Trimss = 65

this was a really funny battle, Trimss easily took the personal tab on his path because it seems like Man1x didn't really bother with it, there was a huge battle with punchline going on but Man1x gets the edge, Trimss had a bigger amount of punchlines but i'm following the quality > quantity way because Man1x's punches were more hard-hitting even though less. Trimss improved a lot but Man1x is really just a flow master, with the multi's and all of that shit .. my god that verse flowed like a river, it was a close battle though. good luck to y'all.

ps Man1x that "why you hate gays" line made me rofl

Thanks man

[Atone]

hey look, somebody else throwing a mention at me, thanks bro, good to know i'm always on your mind

[Atone]

hey look, somebody else throwing a mention at me, thanks bro, good to know i'm always on your mind

It's Hip-Hop, grow a pair.

I was only saying thanks for reminding me that i'm so awesome, that this site will never forget me, even when i barley ever post anymore.

[Blu]

TRIMSS

I know it's so dumb, even Blu would've mocked it

[Man1x]

TRIMSS

I know it's so dumb, even Blu would've mocked it

He's dissing you man, you should vote for me to get back at him

[Trimss]

TRIMSS

I know it's so dumb, even Blu would've mocked it

It was written in a period when you probably said something really dumb lol. Nothing personal though.

[Man1x]

(30) Personals ----------Trimss 20 Man1x 05
(20) Punchlines ---------Trimss 15 Man1x 5
(20) Technique ---------Trimss 15 Man1x 15
(10) Flow -----------------Trimss 10 Man1x 15
(10) Structure -----------Trimss 10 Man1x 10
(10) Vocab/Complex ---Trimss 5 Man1x 15

Man1x 65 - Trimss 75

Man1x's rhyming was better and it flowed better when I tried to read it, but Trimss won in the battling part, his personals were spot on and his punches were funny and it sounded like he got the better deal out this battle. Props both of you though, I did not know this league existed until today (I read earlier battles so I understood all lines btw...). Was checking through the section I neglected forever lol :P BTW, I don't know if everyone's allowed to vote, if they are this is mine, if it's not, this is my opinion, peace