Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

[Sam.]

Here's Em's verse on "Above The Law". Mad props to JustEnjoytheMusic for bringing it to my attention and revealing rhymes I hadn't even noticed before.

You guys might even find more so...word, feedback is always welcome.

Complex.

[Mathers]

Working on "Almost Famous", it's pretty intense. I'll let Inno see it when I finish to proof read it and I'll post it.

Where is it?

[Innovation]

It's great that this thread is still alive and well a year later! A big thank you to those who have contributed to this thread!

I'll definitely be adding some more highlighted songs soon.

[Zellomugi]

someone finish this for me, its an old draft of mine

I'm zonin off of one joint, stoppin a limo
Hopped in the window, shoppin a demo at gunpoint
A lyricist without a clue, what year is this?
Fuck a needle, here's a sword, bodypierce with this
Livin amuk, never givin a fuck
Gimme the keys I'm drunk, and I've never driven a truck
But I smoke dope in a cab
I'll stab you with the sharpest knife I can grab
Come back the next week and re-open your scab (YEAH!)
A killer instinct runs in the blood
Emptyin full clips and buryin guns in the mud
I've calmed down now -- I was heavy once into drugs
I could walk around straight for two months with a buzz
My brain's gone, my soul's worn and my spirit is torn
The rest of my body's still bein operated on
I'm ducked the fuck down while I'm writin this rhyme
Cause I'm probably gonna get struck with lightnin this time

[Chorus:]

For all the weed that I've smoked - yo this blunt's for you
To all the people I've offended - yeah fuck you too!
To all the friends I used to have - yo I miss my past
But the rest of you assholes can KISS MY ASS
For all the drugs that I've done - yo I'm still gon' do
To all the people I've offended - yeah fuck you too!
For everytime I reminisce - yo I miss my past
But I still don't give a fuck, y'all can KISS MY ASS

[Eminem]
I walked into a gunfight with a knife to kill you
And cut you so fast when your blood spilled it was still blue
I'll hang you til you dangle and chain you with both ankles
And pull you apart from both angles
I wanna crush your skull til your brains leaks out of your veins
And bust open like broken water mains
So tell Saddam not to bother with makin another bomb
Cause I'm crushin the whole world in my palm
Got your girl on my arm and I'm armed with a firearm
So big my entire arm is a giant firebomb
Buy your mom a shirt with a Slim Shady iron-on
And the pants to match ("Here momma try em on")
I get imaginative with a mouth full of adjectives,
a brain full of adverbs, and a box full of laxatives
(Shittin on rappers) Causin hospital accidents
God help me before I commit some irresponsible acts again

[Chorus]

[Eminem]
I wanted an album so rugged nobody could touch it [inverse (an al/album)]
Spend a million a track and went over my budget (Ohh shit!)
Now how in the fuck am I supposed to get out of debt?
I can't rap anymore - I just murdered the alphabet
Drug sickness got me doin some bugged twitches
I'm withdrawn from crack so bad my blood itches
I don't rap to get the women - fuck bitches
Give me a fat slut that cooks and does dishes
Never ran with a click - I'm a posse
Kamikaze, strappin a motherfuckin bomb across me
From the second I was born, my momma lost me
I'm a cross between Manson, Esham and Ozzy
I don't know why the fuck I'm here in the first place
My worst day on this earth was my first birthday
Retarded? What did that nurse say? Brain damage?
Fuck, I was born during the earthquake

[Zellomugi]

Was working on it recently. Will be up next.

His SSLP songs need to be approached cautiously, he's got so many hidden rhymes in that era.

exactly. i get dizzy finding rhymes
hope im that good within 10 years

[Zellomugi]

Yo I'm two faced, bugged the fuck out like Mr Furley
So when I swing a fist of fury y'all can kiss the jury
scrap back the fuck up we missed the brewery
hurry Im tryin to pick up Cage's sister early
me n greed smoke weed and OD
we're so keyed there's no need to stop the nosebleed
I need a casket, I killed some conceded bastard
and beat his ass with a bat wrapped in a sheet of acid
i'm pre-disasterous, I fuck shit up before it happens
like blowing engines of airplanes with snoring captains
your styles monotonous like a borin job gets
I come to the battle and beat you with foreign objects
Im dumber than oklahoma ignoring bomb threats
Im dumber than trying to start a war with 'nam vets
My metaphors are like a set of jaws
I get applause, cause people would rather hear mine instead of yours
still on the run from stabbing a bitch in the side
so Im hitching this ride with the motherfuckin indiginous tribe

[Zellomugi]

Yo I'm two faced, bugged the fuck out like Mr Furley
So when I swing a fist of fury y'all can kiss the jury
scrap back the fuck up we missed the brewery
hurry Im tryin to pick up Cage's sister early
me n greed smoke weed and OD
we're so keyed there's no need to stop the nosebleed
I need a casket, I killed some conceded bastard
and beat his ass with a bat wrapped in a sheet of acid
i'm pre-disasterous, I fuck shit up before it happens
like blowing engines of airplanes with snoring captains
your styles monotonous like a borin job gets
I come to the battle and beat you with foreign objects
Im dumber than oklahoma ignoring bomb threats
Im dumber than trying to start a war with 'nam vets
My metaphors are like a set of jaws
I get applause, cause people would rather hear mine instead of yours
still on the run from stabbing a bitch in the side
so Im hitching this ride with the motherfuckin indiginous tribe

[Zellomugi]

lol of course i missed a lot, those are old drafts i never finished and posted cause idk

[Eedee]

HERE COMES THE WEEKEND LYRICS

Yep, yep
Nothing high class in my glass, only bottles I pop are bottles of pop,
So when I pop, upon the spot, I'm probably not,
Gonna be wanting to pop bubbly or Ciroc, I'm not Puffy,
But I'ma run this city tonight, when I hit it I might, act like a frickin' idiot, / frickin' idiot
Diddy mixed with / Diddy mixed with a medieval night,
Big city lights little indignity, hot diggity this Biggie is getting me hyped, / getting me hyped
I don't get some liquor I'll hurt you,
I'll knock your dick in the dirt, bigger and worse than that bitch in that Snickers commercial,
A mixture of Stiffler and Urkel, hanging from the light fixture I hope you pricks are insured for this building cos we tearing it down,
Security get out the fricken way, jesus christ all the blaring is loud,
I swear only thing I hear is the sound of sirens, going EHEHEHEHE cos..

WILL EDIT AS MORE RHYMES ARE FOUND.

[Eedee]

It's "Diddy mixed with" and "Ciroc" instead of "some rock"



You missed some like (in)dignity / diggity.

And those rhymes are inverses of the previous lines rhymes of "Diddy mixed / idiot "

Thanks. I used lyrics that some person posted in the song thread.

You can edit those into there if you like. I'm not good with highlighting rhymes like this.

[Eedee]

Much better than mine haha.

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Menzo... You should open a school for lyricism. I'm like 19% sure you ghostwrite for Em, no one would of picked up on some of the shit you said.


Now... If you could make an analysis for Must Be The Ganja... You'd probably be god.


Just in case I caught your eye...

YEAH I LEARNED HOW TO DO IT AMAR. FUCK WIT ME. Click this though Menzo... It'll be worth your while

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Please don't upset me mama, you lookin sexy mama,
Don't know if this the lala or the rum and Pepsi mama
Don't want to end up inside my refrigerator freezer,
Be used as extra topping the next time I make a pizza
How many people you know can name every serial killer who ever existed in a row,
Put em in chronological order beginning with Jack the Ripper,
Name the time and place from the body the bag the zipper,
Location of the woods where the body was dragged and then dumped,
The trunk that they were stuffed in, the model the make the plate
And which motel which lake they found her in,
And how they attacked the victim,
Say which murder weapon was used to do what and which one,
Which knife and which gun, what kid what wife and which nun,
Don't stop, I like this, it's fun, the fucking nights just begun

tell me you don't wanna change the FUCK out of the colors of those words.

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I just realized what I said about the colors and I'm LOL'ing. I was so hype.

[Blu]

This is what I've mustered:

HUGE exaggerations... Eedee got it right.