lessons

[HAYZI]

i have to say that wasnt a bad rhyme
but ill hit your shit for six any day any time
im still goin easy but your mum shoulda sewn your legs together
cos your too fuckin easy go around fuckin whoever
now its the cricket first it was rugby
yall goin 'crikey! struth! this is startin to bug me!'

[HAYZI]

how bout we have one more round then imma be out and you two can get it on

[V-DogDaMenace]

nice shit up der ^^^^^

how bout we have one more round then imma be out and you two can get it on

ight

[V-DogDaMenace]

kk but uno u gotta wait ages for me
n V u gotta start if were doin it :P

imma do mynes, afta u in hayzi

[HAYZI]

your turn to drop kissie_pie

[V-DogDaMenace]

hold up u cant rush the magic lol :P

lol

[HAYZI]

work your shit baby
<<and look im nearly a soldier 8) :lol:

[V-DogDaMenace]

im outy, i cant spit my shit ryte now ight? ~1~

[HAYZI]

what? struths an aussie word it should cum with your pride
im stormin when im performin im warnin get up n hide
why you keep callin me sexiness
id slap you in you face if you even asked let alone begged for sex
now ive left you a line that you can use for ammunition
but when ppl sign the pertition youll be wishin you hadnt been spittin
i raise the bars like an athlete on polevault
you got no hope like of meeting the old pope john paul (nope)

we go up to 8 lines now yeh you gettin good now you gone wipe the floor wit darjan

[HAYZI]

struth means like fuckin hell but in a polite way

nice rhymin gurl i dont need more tips onli thing i can think of is to keep your lines to an even number

[HAYZI]

niceness thats what im talkin bout multi syllable rhymes
dont get the birthday line tho

right gimme a sec ill drop anutha

[HAYZI]

nah it flows nicely i dont get the birthday bit tho

[HAYZI]

rhymins/risin
dun wit you/ wanna do
birthday/ time eh <ish there close neway you gonna be a sick mc b4 u no it!

k babe im gonna go sleep now neway its 1am
have a good day laterz X

and good thinkin endin on a good lyric by you best way to end

[V-DogDaMenace]

what? struths an aussie word it should cum with your pride
im stormin when im performin im warnin get up n hide
why you keep callin me sexiness
id slap you in you face if you even asked let alone begged for sex
now ive left you a line that you can use for ammunition
but when ppl sign the pertition youll be wishin you hadnt been spittin
i raise the bars like an athlete on polevault
you got no hope like of meeting the old pope john paul (nope)
quote]

fuk, ur still goin? i thought i was dun with u
meh, aint gonna argue, do wut u wana do
must jus enjoy me whippin ur ass at this
more than i wana kno, ur dam gettin off on it
ur raisin the bar? well... fuk sumthins risin
u 'takin care of that' while reedin ma rhymins
ino, weird being called sexy for the first time eh?
shit, wait, no i dont, cant member my fucking birth day

dat shit was hot n funny

[HAYZI]

ok bitch, ill pick up where we left off
i dont want nutin wit your titties ill tear you chest off
and shoot you in your pussy since you like fuckin a-round
and stick my dick in your ear fuck what you heard im sound
i work wonders with my rhymes, magical like shazam
they can be invasive like a vaginal exam
i spit so ill youll die of pain and sickness
flesh rottin and shit like you got aids and syphlliss
im big and im bold, with big lyrics thatll jiggle your bones
one blow to your ribs and i figure youll fold


thats all i can be bothered wit now and not the best i was tryin'a fit in a few different tings you cud learn frm word play differnt multis and shit, neway do your worst, later on babe