J.R./Atone VS SliK/CrashBand [R1-TTT]

[CrashBand]

I'm still not sure of you're serious but I'd love to see you argue how they're multis are better.

I hope Atone wins just for that.

I'm fucked at the sevens

[CrashBand]

Still a better writer than geno though

[Trimss]

I'm still not sure of you're serious but I'd love to see you argue how they're multis are better.

I hope Atone wins just for that.

Guys, I read both of you and I'm gonna vote soon.

[SliK]

I'm still not sure of you're serious but I'd love to see you argue how they're multis are better.

I hope Atone wins just for that.

I'm fucked at the sevens

I doubt they know what the sevens are.

[J.R.]

The anger needs to stop. Lol, I thought both teams were a good read, everybody Needa chill the fuck out and let what happens happen

[J.R.]

I like that, but when everyone is acting like a fucking two year old over an Internet competition (myself included) it needs to end.

[Sam.]

4 Pages and no Result? Wow!

[Just Silver]

lol lets keep pretending its a one round competition

[Trimss]

This was an extremely average round. Average at best. That big as black man's line deserve -1 lmao. Awkward.

[5] Chemistry (How well did they work together. Important for this round)

- CrashBand/Slik took it. Their verse was better, and they continued each other's rhymes in a good way.

[3] Rhyming/Multis

- Y'all had some basic ass rhyming lol. I'll give it to Slik/Crashband though. The "Abort this bitch/contortion is" was too easy, Eminem already did it on FACK. Sorry guys.

[2] Complexity (How complex were the thoughts/rhyme schemes?)

- J.R/Atone. Like I said, CrashBand and Slik took it because of how simple and how it flowed easily. They weren't complex, their rhymes weren't either.

[1] Flow

- Crash/Slik

[1] Vocabulary (Word choice and lexicon)

- JR/Atone

[1] Structure (How presentable and easy to read was the verse?)

- Crash/Slik (using these colors was a really bad idea Atone/J.R lol)

10 - 3 for Crashband/Slik.

[Eedee]

Crash/SliK win 2-0.

[SliK]

Thanks, mostly accurate judging but the rhyming is far from basic.i put more multies in the first 4 lines than they had in their whole verse. Not to mention the "sex isn't worth it you should just forget" "extra deserving of some good fucking head" 10 syllable multi. And the only reason I give a shit is because it's part of the marking criteria so I made an effort to rhyme well.

[Eedee]

Thanks, mostly accurate judging but the rhyming is far from basic.i put more multies in the first 4 lines than they had in their whole verse. Not to mention the "sex isn't worth it you should just forget" "extra deserving of some good fucking head" 10 syllable multi. And the only reason I give a shit is because it's part of the marking criteria so I made an effort to rhyme well.

At least you got the category of rhyming/multis... DGAF and I didn't.

*temper tantrum*

[SliK]

Yeah, I'm not complaining. I appreciate people taking time to help out. I just wonder what it would have taken to have better than "basic" rhymes.

[Eedee]

Yeah, I'm not complaining. I appreciate people taking time to help out. I just wonder what it would have taken to have better than "basic" rhymes.

Tbh I don't think the judges look much at the rhyming, even though it's a big category. *shrug*

[Trimss]

Yeah, I'm not complaining. I appreciate people taking time to help out. I just wonder what it would have taken to have better than "basic" rhymes.

I mean yeah you're rhyming a lot of syllables, but it kinda seems amateur-ish. Like you were trying to take the easiest words to rhyme and rhyme them (ass fans/last chance/last dance) (tits and ass it's ya last). The rhyming wasn't that bad but the words used were pretty simple. That's why you took the rhyming part but not the vocabulary one.

It wasn't amazing, but it wasn't bad. And it worked. So good job to both of you SliK and Crash.