Bigray vs Painkiller

[PAINKILLƎR]

wtf? you said March 15th... lmao

[Just Silver]

leaked battle interesting

[SliK]

I love that this went straight to Great Battles.

Good luck both of you.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Lol I didn't know, sorry about it. I'll start mine now to get it in as soon as possible. Great verse man haha, you had some great lines.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Beat - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m9eBrG1bI4U

Bigray back again, and he's going O for 2
I'm by far the better writer and you know it's true
24 lines? I guess that Classthe_king ethering wasn't enough
I got plenty more rhymes, for this close-minded bum who thinks he's tough
You should have left when you said you were leaving
Crying how you got ganged up and left hurt bleeding
You avoided Slik, trying to take the easy way out
And he's afraid of Spyders, haha I'm teasin' Ray, ouch
But this first time battler will burst and rattle ya bones
So saddle up your high horses and paddle back home
You a gangster? shit you starving like you ain't had dinner yet
You know that fake gangster shit don't play well on the internet
Frontin' like you tot guns and sell drugs like a big boss
But it makes you as sad as the fat fuck you hate, Rick Ross
You wanna be treated like a thug? fuck it then that's it
Come to the ghettos of LA, I'll serve you dead at pits
And I won't be talking basketball when I say the heat coming at you
Shit you'll need a casket dawg when you get beat up and clapped too
Yet you don't even deserve to be a thug you a snuggly motherfucker
Go back to your troll hole man with that stupid and ugly other sucker
Tadpole was it? It's astonishing how you lost he mad slow cousin
You mad bro? bustin' while you smoking that bad dro buzzin'
That's probably why you think your writings' good, you're always baked
It's fucked up cuz you're my friend but you've just been exposed a fake

Line 3 & 4 - class and crashband handed it to bigray in the virgin mary thread claimed to not be close-minded even though there is evidence that proves otherwise

Line 5 - says he was leaving but didn't

Lines 7 & 8 - bigray chose me over a battle clearly caise Slik is a great battker and played with the word spyder a bit being he too is an amazing battler and bigray admited to being afraid of soiders in the SajN spider thread.

Lines 13-14 - bigray is know for talking gangster shit on his verse all the time so I got em comparing him to a fake that he so much hates, Rick Ross

Line 17 - Heat, reffering to the pro bball team and in the streets heat means guns and stuff like that.

Lines 21 & 22 - bigrays match up prior to this was against tadpole, and it was terrible. Tad won... and tad sucked really bad

Line 23 - bigray avid weed smoker, probably affects his judgement.

Sorry if I got the numbered lines mixed up, it's late and I'm tired. Enjoy

[EmTV]

(5) Punchlines - I give it to Pain. I dunno.
(3) Personals- Pain again. The Spi(y)der/Virgin Mary stuff was good
(3) Multies/Rhymes - Even I'd say. Although Ray kept changing his rhymes up at awkward times.
(3) Flow - Pain. Big, I had trouble figuring out how you were flowing, both with and without the beat.
(2) Structure - Pain
(1) Vocab/Complex - Ill give this to Ray. He had some bigger syllable words and complex rhymes.

I don't think my vote means dick but I give it to Pain.



I love you big <3

[Just Silver]

i never know enough personals to battle but CP killed it

[Just Silver]

LMAO sorry guy that was a stupid moment but ya i know i didnt mean to look like a vote :x

[PAINKILLƎR]

I did write to the instrumental "I Shot Ya" by LL Cool J can I still post it or what? :I

[PAINKILLƎR]

Thanks, sorry I forgot the beat. I posted this late last night, wasn't thinking well. Good luck bro.

[SliK]

EmTV isn't in the judge pool so I don't think his vote actually counts unless you want to make voting open to all members? I'm not even sure you're allowed to do that though.

[PAINKILLƎR]

So can anybody vote in the pool for this? It'd be much appreciated.

[Eedee]

(5) Punchlines - Painkiller
(3) Personals - Painkiller
(3) Multies/Rhymes - Painkiller
(3) Flow - Painkiller
(2) Structure - Tie
(1) Vocab/Complex - Tie

Painkiller had the stronger verse with punchlines (I LOL'd at the Virgin Mary one) and personals, I think. Bigray's verse was all over the place with flow/rhyming. Structure was a tie, so was vocab/complexity because at least bigray tried with some punchlines but didn't end up executing them well.

Painkiller gets my vote.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Thanks for voting Eedee. We need more judges doe :I

[PAINKILLƎR]

5 votes seems a little too much to determine a winner, we'd be lucky if we even get 2 more people to vote.