Bigray vs Painkiller

[PAINKILLƎR]

Thanks for voting Slik.

[Spyder]

hmm for me

punches - ray
personals - pk
multies - pk
flow - ray
vocab - n/a
structure - ray

the punches could have gone either way for me, this was def. more a personal battle. i liked the personals in here. i just thought PK had some better ones that i could pick up on easier, and thought they hit a little harder.
the play on my name was alright, but hes never acutally ducked me, if he had it would have been a lot better.
everything else is just kinda there.
but i liked the personals on this one and its closer than the breakdown seems

[PAINKILLƎR]

Thank you Spyder and Geno for voting. What's the vote count so far? Is Spyder's vote a tie or what?

[PAINKILLƎR]

Thanks man, you did good. Good battle.

[12characters]

Well... fuck lol.

Fuck it, I'm posting anyways.

(5) Punchlines - Payne, the internet gangster line was dope as fuck lol.
Plus, Ray had some weird ones like the "Go ahead drop a diss, but first let me take a piss, amigo" and "I’ll eat him quick like twix than shit smoke more cannabis". They sound like rambles tbh.

(3) Personals - Ray, though Payne had some good ones too. You both had personal disses and forum persona disses.
All in all though, I think Ray's about the Desperadoes was the most effective.

(3) Multies/Rhymes - Payne.
Those awkward switch ups can hurt you sometimes, Ray. I mean, I think I can see what you're going for (like some of the old east coast shit), but those only really work in audio tbh.

(3) Flow - Payne, it's always hard for me in text tbh, but I had to stretch the words more with Ray's.

(2) Structure - Payne, even though Payne had some run ons in the beginning, Ray's rhymes were totally misaligned.

(1) Vocab/Complex - Payne, because the way Ray worded some of his lines was really awkward. Plus, Payne's sounded more believable like;

'You avoided Slik, trying to take the easy way out
And he's afraid of Spyders, haha I'm teasin' Ray, ouch'

sounded a lot better and smoother than

'When they names changed to green it wasn’t a dream
You lost all your self esteem, Canada Pure and Eedee
They don’t even acknowledge you they fled the scene
Geno and Slik, both can suck a dick close your lips geez!'

[12characters]

Even though he already won, Payne was who got my vote.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Thanks 12 for your well thought out vote.

I win, that's cool. Thanks to all the judges again and my opponent too. Good battle.