Broken Dream [Lyrics] - TripleNineThree

[TripleNineThree]

Hi guys

Here is the first single off of my next mixtape. I recorded this with my new mic I got today (Shure KSM44). Let me know what you think!!

Broken Dream - https://soundcloud.com/tripleninethree/ ... eninethree
Link of Feed - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=156127

[Eedee]

As you know, I loved this so much.

The hook is deep and powerful and the vibe it has BRINGS me into the song. I literally feel trapped in it and I don't care, because it's awesome.

Your verses were amazing as always, I loved the conviction, story, and delivery. I felt as if you were talking to me specifically; that's how much this song is awesome haha

Jeez man. Best song you've ever done, and probably the best song I've heard in a long time, tbh. It's powerful.

[TripleNineThree]

I really appreciate the listen(s) and encouragement!

[TripleNineThree]

Bump

[Eedee]

Bump

I am currently.

[Trimss]

This was great..

[Tranquil]

Maaaan, this was really good. Loved the quality of the song, sounded really good. The lyrics were deep aswell but the beat seemed to have a dark but up-lifting feel to it, which was good. I loved the chorus aswell, and how you used that echo effect thought the whole song, it added a different feel from just the every-day normal Hip-Hop song which was good. I'll be checking out your mix tape aswell, good shit!

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks for the feed guys, I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

[Eedee]

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Such a good song; I listened to it again today. Like 20 times. Fresh.

[preest]

This is DOPE!!!!! I gotta say, its got a catchy hook, a bit of aggression but not too much, lyrically its pretty sound and the flow is on point throughout, I'm feeling it!! the only thing for me was all the religion references (I'm not a massive fan of religion lol) but I'm not one to judge somebody that is, other than it was dope bro.....perfect single for your mixtape!

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks for the feedback everyone!

[Eedee]

I bought this song as my wife for $25.

[Francesco]

Nice drop... Keep it up man!

[FxTDilz]

This is a cool song, i like the chorus, is that you singing it?

[Mr.DGAF]

This is awesome. First of all, your mixing is amazing. Immediately it sticks out; your stuff sounds professional and it makes it easy to listen to. You've got a great voice for this too, great delivery on this. Lots of emotion and variety in tone, nothing to complain about there. You're only room for improvement, in my eyes, is purely writing and you're getting really good at that too. This is a nice song, the hook is badass man.