My First Offical Music Video!

[MistaVijilantee]

So, this is the latest song I've released and it is the first time I've had the opportunity to make a proper music videos.
This is also an entry to a contest, so if you like it, your comments and feedback would be appreciated.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kK030r1FzgI

Feedback Thread I posted in: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=156726

[Eedee]

I liked it. To be honest, I thought you were a girl until I saw that video.

Onwards to the music!

I liked it. You had great rhymes, I could feel the multis flowing through your veins haha. The vocal quality was sort of poor, but looking past that, the flow was great and delivery was solid. You messed up a few times like at :37 trying to cram too many syllables in, made it sound awkward from an otherwise good flow.

I liked it and subscribed.

[MistaVijilantee]

I liked it. To be honest, I thought you were a girl until I saw that video.

Onwards to the music!

I liked it. You had great rhymes, I could feel the multis flowing through your veins haha. The vocal quality was sort of poor, but looking past that, the flow was great and delivery was solid. You messed up a few times like at :37 trying to cram too many syllables in, made it sound awkward from an otherwise good flow.

I liked it and subscribed.

Really? Haha.

Yeah, I didn't have pop filter and when I was adlibing I was a bit iffy, I think that's why it sounds muddier.
I appreciate your feedback and the like & such.
I have a FB fan page to if you're interested: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Vijilant ... 198?ref=hl
I also really enjoy your music so if you've got anything newer hit me up!

[Eedee]

I liked your page. I just saw you liked mine as well lol. Awesome.

[FxTDilz]

naaw the perfect couple :P

[Midnight EyeZ]

The sounds were a little too high...Sounds like the vocals were really turnt up, especially with the adlibs it sounded really distorted, muffled and over-bassy...I know you say you didn't have a pop filter but I'm talking about the general levels...Sounded way too loud for a beat that didn't have too much going on...

Which brings me to the second point which is I didn't really like the beat...That's my personal opinion anyway, other people might love it but for me there needed to be a little bit more to it...

Apart from that I enjoyed it, nice lyrics, good flow, some nice multis in there...

Good job but the vocal levels really let it down...

7/10

[MistaVijilantee]

The sounds were a little too high...Sounds like the vocals were really turnt up, especially with the adlibs it sounded really distorted, muffled and over-bassy...I know you say you didn't have a pop filter but I'm talking about the general levels...Sounded way too loud for a beat that didn't have too much going on...

Which brings me to the second point which is I didn't really like the beat...That's my personal opinion anyway, other people might love it but for me there needed to be a little bit more to it...

Apart from that I enjoyed it, nice lyrics, good flow, some nice multis in there...

Good job but the vocal levels really let it down...

7/10

Thank you sir, I'll take note of that next time I record.

[FxTDilz]

I've given you my advice but main thing is the song could've done without the holy water part lol
nice work though bro

[Francesco]

I checked it... I like it.

[MistaVijilantee]

I checked it... I like it.