bigray vs Just Silver

[PAINKILLƎR]

Yeah I saw it in backstage so I came over and voted. Every time Silver asks for a favor in backstage I do it. When he asks if we can feed his CW pieces I do it. You can even ask Silver about it.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Never saw that tbh, but you can ask him when he asks on last one to post thread I feed his work. #realtalk #getatmedoe

[PAINKILLƎR]

No, I don't that was genuine feedback. This battle verse here sucks, nothing like that piece on CW I fed. I was really surprised by how good that verse was I even had convos with Eedee wondering if anybody has been ghostwriting for you. This verse was terrible and that's real.

[PAINKILLƎR]

JS didn't really do well, but imo he did better than you. The categories that were close were personals and multis. I gave him personals because he had more and they were a bit more affective. I gave him multis because his were more consistent and yours were just all over the place rhyming a lot of words in exchange losing a grip of what your verse is about and getting the reader lost.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Yeah I shouldn't have said it sucked, but I just wanted to upset you lol

[PAINKILLƎR]

Sure, why not.

[Just Silver]

Im up for it i still have two projects though in the works

[PAINKILLƎR]

Yeah me too, working on that duo cypher verse. But whenever y'all ready just shoot me a PM.

[Just Silver]

come on guys we need votes

[Mr.DGAF]

Punches - Silver
Personals - Silver
Multies - Silver
Flow - Ray
Vocab - Tie

I'll give it to Silver. Tough because you guys are both relatively new at this, but Silver had a decent verse for a first timer. A few good punches and personals; not many, but enough to get you the win. Ray had a good verse for just putting one out but personally, I'd never release a verse unless I was 100% certain it was as well written as possible. For a battle verse you really gotta do some research, dig some shit up, and tie punches in with personals. That's the wow factor, the kind of thing that'll sway a close battle like this. And I saw a bit more of that in Silver's verse than yours man.

I'd recommend you both keep battling. I won't judge Ray too harshly because he just dropped it to have it done with, and whether I think that's acceptable or not, I understand the circumstances. Silver, you've got the concept down for sure. I thought the flow was iffy because you've got some weird rhyme placement in there, made it difficult for me to get at first. Ray's flow was more simple but I got it so that cat went to him.

[Just Silver]

thanks guy lets close this i barely could find any personals lol that shits hard :/

[Spyder]

Silver wins