by Mr.DGAF » May 9th, '13, 01:08
Punches - Silver
Personals - Silver
Multies - Silver
Flow - Ray
Vocab - Tie
I'll give it to Silver. Tough because you guys are both relatively new at this, but Silver had a decent verse for a first timer. A few good punches and personals; not many, but enough to get you the win. Ray had a good verse for just putting one out but personally, I'd never release a verse unless I was 100% certain it was as well written as possible. For a battle verse you really gotta do some research, dig some shit up, and tie punches in with personals. That's the wow factor, the kind of thing that'll sway a close battle like this. And I saw a bit more of that in Silver's verse than yours man.
I'd recommend you both keep battling. I won't judge Ray too harshly because he just dropped it to have it done with, and whether I think that's acceptable or not, I understand the circumstances. Silver, you've got the concept down for sure. I thought the flow was iffy because you've got some weird rhyme placement in there, made it difficult for me to get at first. Ray's flow was more simple but I got it so that cat went to him.
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