The way to be.

[survce]

http://soundcloud.com/kyle-harrington-6/the-way-to-be


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You know that feeling that you get
When it can't get no worse then this
And all you feel is emptiness
And life is like its meaningless
My past it cast a shadow like
That nothing that I do is right
And all them bruises that I earn
Its like I'm never gonna learn
And every time I make a turn
I'm looking back at bridges burned
My friends they start to fade away
I'm losing one like everyday
At night I might not ever pray
But try my best to write and say
More less confess in my own way
For all mistakes I ever made
Never thought I'd be the one
To stop and think before I run
Ashamed of all the shit I've done
I can't remember having fun
Looking back at all the times
I was all ways in a bind
Once again I'm on rewind
I gotta get it through my mind
And even though I see a sign
I'm walking on a crooked line
What's it gonna take for me
To open up my eyes and see
This fuckin life of misery
I know its not the way to be

[TripleNineThree]

Read the rules....

[survce]

Read the rules....

My bad. I thought I posted the link of feed.

[Mr.DGAF]

Welllll, you've got the flow down. That's a plus. Your lyrics are pretty good too, not too many multi rhymes but that's not necessarily a terrible thing. The most important thing is to work on your delivery. I had the same prob too a while back, I'm still working on fixing it. It just comes with time though. You'll feel it eventually dawg. Other than that, this wasn't that bad.

[survce]

Hey I really appreciate that. I agree. My delivery is weak lol