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Untitled Song by sneak

Postby sneakerheadshady » Nov 10th, '13, 16:57

My LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=166424&p=2458649#p2458649

all my jordans OG, my shoes sqeaky clean,
I'll kick you off the team, your skills are just a dream
people say im nice, but haters think im mean
some people ask me what i do, i say im reppin shady team
i would say im gettin paper, but i don't even have one ream
my skills are mediocre, but im not one to be a choker
i'm more of a joker, except when i play poker
getting in the game, my skills are more than lame
i just need more practice, so i can achieve fame.
learnin how to rap, in my flu games
im straight fire, soon you'll know my name

im gonna add more to this, the beat is something i made, so i cant post a link to it, but feedback/ suggestions to add would be sweet! also, what rhyme scheme would this be?

if i ever make my mixtape ill probably have this be a verse on a song
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#Silver #Rolly #bigray #Pain #flamez #charlotte #Hage #Samantha #guilty #eedee #horsefam #snake #raul #EG
horse wrote:You’ll never go gold, that’s why you’re just silver

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Re: Untitled Song by sneak

Postby Eedee » Nov 11th, '13, 09:00

I liked the Jordans/team/dream wordplays (referring to the Dream Team?) lol.
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Re: Untitled Song by sneak

Postby sneakerheadshady » Nov 11th, '13, 12:28

Eedee wrote:I liked the Jordans/team/dream wordplays (referring to the Dream Team?) lol.

it was sorta referring to that, yes. :b:
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#Silver #Rolly #bigray #Pain #flamez #charlotte #Hage #Samantha #guilty #eedee #horsefam #snake #raul #EG
horse wrote:You’ll never go gold, that’s why you’re just silver

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