Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

[Mr.DGAF]

Hows Rap God going?

SHE'S SO BEAUTIFUL.

forreal doe (even though I meant my statement above), I saw that this thread went back like 4 pages since the last time I'd checked it and just knew there'd be a new verse highlighted. Such disappointment.

[Innovation]

Hows Rap God going?

That's beauty tbh.

[Innovation]

I'm not sure if I should just make the new thread when RG is done.

Might as well, especially with MMLP2 coming out very soon.

[CrashBand]

yikes

[Innovation]

Working on So Far atm. Going to send Menzo the first verse to look over a bit later.

Brainless please

[Eedee]

I'd love to see Headlights.

Nate's part at the end (and all his parts) were written by Em, it seems.

Because I put my faith in my new girl, so I never say goodbye cruel world

Could also argue for this:

Because I put my faith in my new girl, so I never say goodbye cruel world

Also:

Because I put my faith in my new girl, so I never say goodbye cruel world

[LK5]

Sorry guys, the thread's a mess lol.

RG is done except the third verse, that's about 80-85% done.

So where is it?

[Eedee]

Backs to the wall, I’m stacking up all them odds
Toilets clogged, yeah cause I’m talking a lot of shit but I’m backing it all up
But in my head there’s a voice in the back and it hollers
After the track is demolished; I am your lack of a conscience
I’m the ringing in your ears
I’m the polyps on the back of your tonsils
Eating your vocal chords after your concerts
I’m your time that’s almost up that you haven’t acknowledged
Grab for some water but I’m that pill that’s too jagged to swallow

Dat part.

[Innovation]

Backs to the wall, I’m stacking up all them odds
Toilets clogged, yeah cause I’m talking a lot of shit but I’m backing it all up
But in my head there’s a voice in the back and it hollers
After the track is demolished; I am your lack of a conscience
I’m the ringing in your ears
I’m the polyps on the back of your tonsils
Eating your vocal chords after your concerts
I’m your time that’s almost up that you haven’t acknowledged
Grab for some water but I’m that pill that’s too jagged to swallow

Dat part.

You could probably add "talking a lot of" to that too.

[Eedee]

Damn son. Good call.

[Malphas]

I wanna see some MMLP2 songs Q_Q

[Eedee]

I ain't here to save the fucking children
But if one kid out of a hundred million
Who are going through a struggle feels and then relates, that's/ that's great
It's payback, Russell Wilson falling way back in the draft
Turn nothing into something, still can make that, straw into gold chump
I will spin Rumpelstiltskin in a haystack
Maybe I need a straight jacket / jacket face facts, I am nuts for real
But I'm okay with that, it's nothing, I'm still friends with the...

I kinda wanna put "nothing I'm still friends" into that red scheme, but syllables don't match up. Oh well. Say what you will about The Monster sounding like shit, Em puts in work.

[Coulter]

I ain't here to save the fucking children
But if one kid out of a hundred million
Who are going through a struggle feels and then relates, that's/ that's great
It's payback, Russell Wilson falling way back in the draft
Turn nothing into something, still can make that, straw into gold chump
I will spin Rumpelstiltskin in a haystack
Maybe I need a straight jacket / jacket face facts, I am nuts for real
But I'm okay with that, it's nothing, I'm still friends with the...

You could add that yo.

[Eedee]

Actually it goes with the scheme.

"Nuts for real, but"

[unmissingpiece]

Don't know if this has been done, but there's some good rhyming in GTC's first lines
Lately I really, feel like I'm rolling for delph like Philly,
I feel like I'm losing control of myself, I sincerely,
Apologize if all that I sound like is I'm complaining,
But life keeps on complicating, an' I'm debating,
On leaving this world, this evening, even my girls,
Can see I'm/I'm grievin', I try and hide it,
But I can't, why do I act like I'm all high and mighty,