Quick Shit

[Dewey Decimal]

Keystyled a Piece Awhile Ago .. It Was Suppose To Be a Collab W/ Boston But it Never Happened. Whaddup bro

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No Duh'. The Team Is Gleam And We Won't Budge
Due to Dew, Boston Doesn't Need a Marathon To "Blow Up"
(Too Soon) Catch a Limp Walking in Dews Shoes.
The Best Carpenters Couldn't Even Fix These Loose Screws
Ill Puncture A Hole. Fuck what you Sold,
We're Monster Trucks And you're just another Bump in The Road
Turn the Slums into Gold, & The Young Into Old by Racing Time
Bitches 'Change Their Mind' Like Frankenstein
So Baby... Am i Getting in That Ass Or Not?
Cuz Im All 'Spaced Out' Like an Astronaut
No... Im All 'Spaced Out' Like Captain Spock
Ill Be Waiting in Dem Bushes Wearing Camoflauge
Just to make a gun 'Pop' Like a Can Of Soda
You'll Lose Your Leg, & 'Win a Peg' Like Manitoba
Man its ova.

[IBasicallyRage]

I loved the beginning, and I agree with bigray, that line sounded a little forced, but other than that, its great

[Dewey Decimal]

Points for being honest, thanks for reading.

[IBasicallyRage]

Lol. This was pretty awesome. I was gonna criticize the spaced out/astronaut line but then you repeated it again and it made me feel like you were intentionally being kinda cliche with that. Maybe not (lol?).

I really liked it though, dunno why. I read it out loud in a retarded voice because your avy asked me to and it just sounded nice. Well done.

Lmao ^

[Just Silver]

Shit was crazy nice

Lots of wordplay one after another
Only thing I can really say to improve is length of your verse

Didn't know you were this good tbh

[Dewey Decimal]

Thanks for digging this up & reading it