Unabomber

[Mr.DGAF]

Well, I was holding this piece to record. But I saw 2,000 posts were close so I figured I'd drop a verse since I did the same with my 1,000th post. Anywho, here ya go.

Feed:http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=169600
Beat:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dLEcdLSP2Wc

I’m not the same kid you thought you knew
My brain switched as a product of my falling tunes
Every record had a purpose but the perp was never
Settled, for the record if it was then I’d be caught with you
I view my music as a learning curve
I blurted words and felt that I was too mature for her
But surely virgins of this moody music do these stupid
Foolish things and only few of you could view the future
So I choose to see a reason for hope, when I needed you most
That was only me in need of needing me to be old
For the wisdom that you gain is only mental as you age
You see the picture; it gets bigger and begins to split the framework
Right in half, and so in light of that
I recognize I better try and get behind my past
I apologize for acting stupid, I was only doing music as I acted through it
But that was foolish, I could’ve took the easier route
And ask you fully if you knew what I was heated about
Fuck it, another reason I should make amends
Cause you were not the only reason I was angry then
Fuel within, spreading fast as another summer past
Come to facts with the thought that I would lose my friends
We’re moving in a separate path and if it’s destined we’ll be back
But we’ll never live the past like we used to live
That thought was scary so I moved away
And fought my bearings as I wandered to a newer place
Viewing faces unfamiliar, to this day I still remember
How it pained me to be here and how I waited with this feeling
That I’d never make it, now I’m celebrating
Cause by the time I make it home I’ll be forever changing
But that’s a part of life --, and now I know this talent only is a part of why
I’ve grown in ways I’d never guess, hoping when I let it rest
My regrets will only mark how I used my art to hide


eedee is gay :')

[Just Silver]

Pretty strong piece lyrically flow wise it was nice as well especially in the beginning

I felt the title didn't really make much sense from what I read but its still a well written piece
Rhyme scheme was classic abab at points which I liked

All in all a pretty good verse lyrically it just didn't draw me in like your older piece

[Mr.DGAF]

Pretty strong piece lyrically flow wise it was nice as well especially in the beginning

I felt the title didn't really make much sense from what I read but its still a well written piece
Rhyme scheme was classic abab at points which I liked

All in all a pretty good verse lyrically it just didn't draw me in like your older piece

I just titled it that cause that's what the beats called haha. Thanks for the feed mane.

[Eedee]

Gah 2dope m8

[Mr.DGAF]

Gah 2dope m8

:'D

[CanadaPure]

Co-sign what Bigray said, it felt really natural (especially the part about Eedee being gay). Really wish you'd drop more here, but you got those audioz goin too, which are obviously more important.

[Snakebeast]

Very well written and flows absolutely perfectly. Spot on.

Lines I liked:

I view my music as a learning curve
I blurted words and felt that I was too mature for her
But surely virgins of this moody music do these stupid
Foolish things and only few of you could view the future

Fantastic rhyming here and you managed to stick in some interesting content in there as well.

Right in half, and so in light of that

Not genius or anything, but the rhyming is once again fantastic and natural as fuck. The rhyming throughout this piece is perfect. No forced rhyming or anything.

But that’s a part of life --, and now I know this talent only is a part of why
I’ve grown in ways I’d never guess, hoping when I let it rest
My regrets will only mark how I used my art to hide

Fantastic way to end the piece.

I know this isn't the most elaborate of feeds, but overall I just really liked this piece. You didn't do anything groundbreaking, but everything just felt natural and just overall very well done.

[shadyblogger]

Nice rhymes and flow bro

[Mr.DGAF]

Whew, thanks for the feed guys! Much appreciated.

[SandMan]

yess nice piece DGAF flowed very well keep it up dude.