Spyder vs ShadyPhantom(needs votes)

[Spyder]

put your bank in the wishing well, hell sacrifice a baby goat
saying alcohol dangerous, til i Jack, Daniel and turn Shady 'ghost.'

dude is lame, another clueless dame couldnt chose a username n,
he prolly dye his hair to resemble Em or a fucking super sayan.

leave you free-fall, hand on each ball speed crawl til your knees hurt
send you through a wood chipper like tree birch feet first like a breach birth!

you cant pun with punch, or all around fuck with me your structure weak
just another fucking geek thinking he 'sick' after getting hooked on Recovery.

[shadyphantom91]

You looking for an ass-whipping, I' m the provider
Bury this bitch deep in the dirt so you wont find her
No need for any pesticide all I need is a shoe for this spider
I'm gonna learn this dude a lesson
U still wouldn't defeat me if I had you under my possession
There is no venom in your spit
I mean you have 8 legs but you still couldn't hit
Father forgive me for what I did
I just burned the soul of this lowly arachnid.

[Mr.DGAF]

Whew. Gonna skip the talley cause I'd give Spyder every category and don't really wanna copy that shit out. Idk, seemed pretty clear cut to me. Wasn't feeling the super sayan bar, the set up was a bit ehhh for me. The Recovery line was sick though, very nicely done. On the other hand, phantom didn't really bring much excitement. The rhymes were decent but there was very little in the way of wordplay and whatnot. Just focus on creating some punchlines man, that's the basis of this stuff. Against guys like Spyder you've gotta come hard with either personals or punches and since you don't know too much about him I think punchlines woulda been the best route.

1-0 Spyder.

[shadyphantom91]

Whew. Gonna skip the talley cause I'd give Spyder every category and don't really wanna copy that shit out. Idk, seemed pretty clear cut to me. Wasn't feeling the super sayan bar, the set up was a bit ehhh for me. The Recovery line was sick though, very nicely done. On the other hand, phantom didn't really bring much excitement. The rhymes were decent but there was very little in the way of wordplay and whatnot. Just focus on creating some punchlines man, that's the basis of this stuff. Against guys like Spyder you've gotta come hard with either personals or punches and since you don't know too much about him I think punchlines woulda been the best route.

1-0 Spyder.

Yeah I agree with everything you said.I gotta come with punchlines against a great battler like Spyder since I don't know that much about him personally. My lines were ok but lacked that sting. That Recovery line was an awesome personal cause I admitted in my introduction to TRSHADY that I became a fan after Recovery. I think the jack daniel and turn shady ghost was good as well cause it was a good play on my name and username.


Thanks @Spyder for the battle!

[Eedee]

Yeah I'm going to give it to Spyder, kinda hard for a forum newbie (no offense) to have much ammo against a mod haha. Plus Spyder had some sick lines in there.

[Spyder]

thanks for the votes guys.

@Phantom, i got a shit ton of personals out there, yes most have been used against me but just search through someones posts, view their other battles, and find new ways to work those angles. good shit though keep at it.

1 more will close it.

[Spyder]

3-0