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Dreams Are For Sleeping

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Re: Dreams Are For Sleeping

Postby enrikex » Jul 24th, '14, 17:42

This was amazing, already got it on my iPod, sounds greats, the rhymes are straight dope, flows really well with the beat, really solid. Your verses are really cool, it's like a "chill" song . I actually liked the bridge first listen, and your delivery is really good.

I loved this:


"I checked for rain, but I think I'll take a rain check
Eat dust, I speed up till it breaks necks
This terminal's ill, I got baggage I ain't claimed yet
Pay debts, face them with a head start
My head starts to throb, brain melts and I sweat hard
White noise - it's like nails on a chalkboard
If you wait for an encore, failure's a lot more subtle"
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Re: Dreams Are For Sleeping

Postby Vettori » Jul 28th, '14, 16:00

The instrumental is cool. I liked the writing a lot.
I can tell you are somewhat technical with your writing, You remind me more of poet than a rapper
Construct certain words better and schemes & you'll be dope as fuck. A faster tempo might do you justice. Cool song man :) Check my new one out.
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Re: Dreams Are For Sleeping

Postby TripleNineThree » Jul 30th, '14, 02:00

Awesome, as usual. Multis, flow, delivery were all on point. I can't really find anything to knock. I liked the flanging effect you threw on the first verse, it fit it well. The chorus also goes really good with the beat. It has a weird/pushed back sound to it but it works really well for this beat. Keep up the good work man!
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Re: Dreams Are For Sleeping

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Jul 31st, '14, 04:20

I haven't heard or seen material from you since like '11-'12, and, damn, I was pleasantly surprised by this. Production was great, easy on the ears, and lyrics were on point. I guess, like someone else said, I wasn't really feeling the hook but that's it. Very nice.
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Re: Dreams Are For Sleeping

Postby Eedee » Jul 31st, '14, 11:52

Thanks for the looks guys! Got some new stuff soon I hope.
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Re: Dreams Are For Sleeping

Postby sneakerheadshady » Sep 20th, '14, 17:58

the verses were solid, im not gonna lie tho i really did not like the hook/bridge when you werent rapping.
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