SWYWS Ft. Jay-Rah

[TripleNineThree]

New song, check it out here! - https://soundcloud.com/tripleninethree/swyws-ft-jay-rah

LoF - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=168838

Lyrics to my verse (1st verse)
I don't think you get it I live it just how I spit it
Go ahead call me a bigot no tripping you are forgiven

Every second every minute I'm living it in His rhythm
Go and tell me your opinion I'm hypocritically sinnin?

Plussss I'm discriminating and hating on women
I am just a Bible Thumper with an ancient religion

Well Let me break down your vision, I'm not forsaken His Image
Until the day that I'm finished, He is the Way and I'll witness

That everythang is His business you better wake up and get this
Or there's a Lake as a sentence and there's no faking repentance

And you can say its offensive Because His truth ain't dependent
On how you thought that He meant it I will not stop be offended

[TripleNineThree]

:laughing:

You need to learn how to read the rules.

"No spamming, Trolling or sake-arguing... if you are seen Either spamming or trolling in here, you will get a mutherfucking bann... so fuck off with that shit"

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[MistaVijilantee]

The song is pretty good, you can obviously rap however I'd like to see you rap more about things apart from God & Religion.

[TheBoss123]

I like your delivery a lot.

[TripleNineThree]

@MistaVijilantee - Thanks man! Eedee and I are working on a song with a concept about the power and beauty of music, it will be less religious so that's something to look out for!

@TheBoss - Thanks fam I appreciate the listen and feedback!

[Eedee]

I already told you what I thought about this over Facebook a while back, but after a fresh listen just now, I have a few comments.

1) Tight schemes and your flow was great (as always)

2) Your vocals felt... emptier than your usual stuff. Not sure if it's the mic or the room or the mixing or what, but they don't sound as full and warm as your stuff normally does. It's obviously not a big nitpick since no one has mentioned it yet, but that's something I heard. *shrug*. It sounds like you're too far away from the mic. Gotta get that warmth yo

[TripleNineThree]

@Eedee - Thanks for the feedback. That actually makes sense about my vocals. All of my setting got reset so I am re-configuring everything and there are a couple of settings I usually use which were not used in that verse. Thanks!

[Tash8]

I like your energy on the track it fits the guitars well. Flow n rhymes done well. Guy in second verse had nice delivery too