drowsy

[Dewey Decimal]

met a virgin with an STD
but I cant fuck the bitch cuz shes 17
No remorse, im an outcast fuck the social norm
Like people on the titanic; I am goimg overboard
Hockey on a snowy course,
Never thought id see a Goalie score
I Dont even know whats happening
I Just de-feathered a bird and its still tryina flap its wings
Dewey decimal I can rap or sing
So Remember that when u want a power clash
I coumt every second in my hourglass
Behimd the makeup every clown is sad
Used to be kids, used to have loot that we'd steal
Used to play cops n robbers now we do it for real
Rebuild me like they did to astro boy
Mooches keep telling me to pass my joint
Need staff employed, 4 sides to a story like its a fuckin trapezoid
Im 21 but I act like a teenager
I get that chedder and my girl is a cheese grater
homie, I fuck bitches, straight up ... Bad bitches, no A cups
And if she dont look pretty then im givimg that bitch some Make-up
Fight & make up, got a weapons ban cuz im dangerous
Kill the nigga take his wallet & find out who that stranger is


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[shadyblogger]

I enjoyed this piece. Perfect length imo for what it was. Really liked the flow towards the end and your lyrical content was smooth too

[Dewey Decimal]

Found it hard to get back into my groove lol its something tho

[Just Silver]

It was ok but I've seen much better from you

Opening line was sorta shitty but I got a bit better afterwards

Favorite line was that cops and robbers line

Couldn't make much sense of that goalie line

Just keep at it guy