306

[Eedee]

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New song, new album, etc etc.

https://soundcloud.com/eedeemusic/eedee ... mito-beats

Eedee
306
(Prod. by Omito Beats)

[Verse 1]
The barrel of this gun points down this narrow road,
I shot for the stars, and end up all alone
The moon is my sun, chillin' and kickin' it
Nocturnal-like is making me go bat-shit insane
Rap it, don't spray it, get your nozzle fixed,
Dawg, don't be a bitch, get a scent and follow it.
Damnit, Eric's all flustered and shit
I'm under pressure like a can of aerosol
(But) something's amiss, (but) nothing I give
Is enough for me to take it, (but) it's water under the bridge
Got addicted to rap when my equipment was bad,
Couple thousand dollars later, there's this dick to be had
So fucking invested at my own expense
Granted, the only stake is alone with no interest
And no investors willin' to bank on it,
So thank all ya'll, take a stab, kill me or gild me...

[Hook]
I take it back, yo (Nothing is as it seems)
I take it back, yo (Nothing is as it seems)
I take it all back. (Nothing is as it seems)
I wish I could take it all back.

[Verse 2]
"KK", wait, fuckin' bae bae's cray
One year at college, down 18K
Wow, may-day, hey! S'all play, play, play
And no work, work, work, because they waste space
Flip the page, cock-blocked by the spirals
I assume the tires blew, walk the mile
Fam, I'm famished, artists starved for attention
Fam, when you make it, do your hardest to mention me
Crawl on my bellly for the spot-light
Fast cars, money, big stage, and a hot wife
That's not why I'm doin' it
But it's incentive enough to cool it kid, don't ruin it
Hell, I'm not sure that I'm ever sure,
I'm full of shit, I'll take the plunge to the nether world
Abandon all hope, yeah, we know this,
There ain't comin' out... 306...

[Hook]
I take it back, yo (Nothing is as it seems)
I take it back, yo (Nothing is as it seems)
I take it all back. (Nothing is as it seems)
I wish I could take it all back...

[MistaVijilantee]

This beat is weird as fuck - in a good way - and the way you're flowing on it is legit.
The interest/investor word play was fucking crazy however some of it is delivered a bit awkwardly which I think is partly to do with it's the fact it's kind of a slant rhyme.
I know you're a fan of him and I can definitely see the Childish Gambino influence lately.
Overall, wicked song. THe concept is good too, a nice reflection on things going around you at present.
What does 306 mean doe?

[Jaba]

Great song man. Love the rhymes, flow, beat. I really love the meaning of it too. but what does 306 mean? haha.

[yung rom]

Beat is cool, I like the calm yet trippy feel to it. The "bat-shit insane" line seemed out of place. Liked the "but" phrasing. Was digging the no interest rhyme scheme section part, but the v in investors seemed to be just a taad off, not too noticeable tho. Chorus is super weird but it's actually sorta cool, can't wait to here within the context of your album. Flow of second verse was much better. I initially didn't like the dialogue sample playing during the verse, but the more I listen, the more I like how they blend. Feel dumb for not understanding the importance of the number 306, but I expect it'll also be explained on the album. Loved the dialogue at the end, how you could hear it so clearly, yet you couldn't tell what was being said.

Overall, awesome track, can't wait for the album!

[Eedee]

Thanks guys!

This isn't actually going on the album, ROM. It's just a promo track, but the concept/theme of the album is still there.

[TheBoss123]

I dig it, you seem more comfortable in your own voice than you had been on previous work Iv heard from you, and I assume that will only continue to improve as you keep rapping.

[sneakerheadshady]

trippy as fuck in headphones

and also, i agree with who said that your second verse sounded much more comfortable