Elision 2014

[Elision]

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=174524

avoided posting here for the last 3 years since master chief fucked me up for a while after this viewtopic.php?f=38&t=133492 hopefully this'll satisfy you faggots.

this year's acapella installment


i miss a bar near the end it was supposed to be:
you mufuckas don't want nothin, i'm fucked up man
i'm bum rushin a bum russian, so what suck it
i come bustin this combustion and fucks love it
i come dumpin with one punch i could crush lundgren

[DƎRDYPK]

First, Fiiiiiiirrrrrrreeee

also lol @
bum rushin a bum russian

clever

[yoda you can call me]

Wow, Dem fucking syllables. Good fucking shit hombre

[Rafael]

Better than 90% of the rappers you listen to.

[Jaba]

Did. YOU GOT TALENT. But you really need to stop biting TECH N9NE (of all people). So much. I listened to your cypher, both sound very similar. Maybe try rapping slower?

Biting people or not, your probably still one of the best (if you come back) TR rapper's out right now.

edit - advice for next time. dont record yourself with a camera

[yoda you can call me]

Did. YOU GOT TALENT. But you really need to stop biting TECH N9NE (of all people). So much. I listened to your cypher, both sound very similar. Maybe try rapping slower?

Biting people or not, your probably still one of the best (if you come back) TR rapper's out right now.

edit - advice for next time. dont record yourself with a camera

Jealous much?

[Vice]

Some talent in the writing there but I was hearing a lotta bitten rhymes and patterns (and not just the lines you referenced from classic songs)

For example..

3:05 in your song sounded completely ripped from:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g1lgUwHyKQQ

3:45

I think you'd have something pretty legit tho if you were to find your own style. Also, writing a legit song is much diff than writing a random freestyle. This lacked substance imo

Don't take offense tho, clearly you can put the words together, just need to put more behind what's being said

[Jaba]

Did. YOU GOT TALENT. But you really need to stop biting TECH N9NE (of all people). So much. I listened to your cypher, both sound very similar. Maybe try rapping slower?

Biting people or not, your probably still one of the best (if you come back) TR rapper's out right now.

edit - advice for next time. dont record yourself with a camera

Jealous much?

Yoda in the audio section.

[yoda you can call me]

Did. YOU GOT TALENT. But you really need to stop biting TECH N9NE (of all people). So much. I listened to your cypher, both sound very similar. Maybe try rapping slower?

Biting people or not, your probably still one of the best (if you come back) TR rapper's out right now.

edit - advice for next time. dont record yourself with a camera

Jealous much?

Yoda in the audio section.

I'm everywhere at once nigga.
Omnipresence in this bitch.

[shadyblogger]

And the place got quiet...

[Elision]

Some talent in the writing there but I was hearing a lotta bitten rhymes and patterns (and not just the lines you referenced from classic songs)

For example..

3:05 in your song sounded completely ripped from:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g1lgUwHyKQQ

I wasn't ripping off em, it was a direct quote from Worldwide Choppers' final verse http://youtu.be/0GhbkrOg9gA?t=5m8s i took the opening bar and pulled it the opposite direction, figured it'd be obvious.

edit - advice for next time. dont record yourself with a camera

I do it for the acapellas, makes them feel more raw than just audio. also shows that it's all one take.

[Jaba]

Some talent in the writing there but I was hearing a lotta bitten rhymes and patterns (and not just the lines you referenced from classic songs)

For example..

3:05 in your song sounded completely ripped from:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g1lgUwHyKQQ

I wasn't ripping off em, it was a direct quote from Worldwide Choppers' final verse http://youtu.be/0GhbkrOg9gA?t=5m8s i took the opening bar and pulled it the opposite direction, figured it'd be obvious.

edit - advice for next time. dont record yourself with a camera

I do it for the acapellas, makes them feel more raw than just audio. also shows that it's all one take.

Oh ok thats cool.

And for the video, i take that back. You actually look pretty bad ass when ur rapping. Sorta like a physco but idk. I like the vids.

Hopefully you post some songs, your good.

[DetroitSkills]

fire

[mdemaz]

was dope af

I dunno what people are talking about fucking bitter desensitized cynical cuntstains

[MistaVijilantee]

Wasn't expecting this at all, Tech N9ne influence is quite evident but nonetheless you make it your own in a way, lyrics were hectic.
Good stuff