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bar ft kez - i can spit this

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 26th, '06, 22:30

ok new track

mixed by me :smoking:


this was a learning track sorta i wanted to mix a full trakc myslef and see if it could work


http://download.yousendit.com/FD33319269D86532

ill have more links soon

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 26th, '06, 22:35

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Postby SenatorN » Dec 26th, '06, 22:50

good, but it would sound better without the echo.

maybe u could use the echo in the chorus.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 26th, '06, 23:11

SenatorN wrote:good, but it would sound better without the echo.

maybe u could use the echo in the chorus.


yeh its a delay , i know after i did it i thought it might be better without but i didnt know lol thx ill remember in future :8)
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 26th, '06, 23:16

Killa wrote:its like this and like that and like this and like that and a ..... :p

nice i liked it but kez is way over drowned in echo :sweating: but nice track. :8)


thanx for checking it :8)
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Postby MoBrat » Dec 27th, '06, 00:38

i like it but the echo or delay doesn't help but it sounds good on the chorus kez has good rhymes but the echo or delay makes him sound weird but overall good track :thumbsup:
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Postby mart85 » Dec 27th, '06, 04:22

yeah, like evrybody said, the delay gets kinda irritating, it's better to use that just for intro, and sometimes chorus... it sounds like you had a new mixer and got excited about using the effects :whistle: lol... good song though
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 27th, '06, 12:47

mart85 wrote:yeah, like evrybody said, the delay gets kinda irritating, it's better to use that just for intro, and sometimes chorus... it sounds like you had a new mixer and got excited about using the effects :whistle: lol... good song though


pretty much yeh :sweating:


the reason its on all is coz i can physically be at the mixer and recording at the same time lol


thx for the feed ya'll
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Postby AspirinE » Dec 27th, '06, 13:30

I like it.. but Bar you needa work ur flow up a bit.

Play with intonations and try to not stumble words, let them words flow with a bar ending to every snare. The vocal/beat combination will be very rhythmic.
In raps thats one of the most important things.

Not bad though i like the oldschool sound.


the echo on Kez's verse made it harder to understand, but i like his flow better.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 27th, '06, 14:37

ASP wrote:I like it.. but Bar you needa work ur flow up a bit.

Play with intonations and try to not stumble words, let them words flow with a bar ending to every snare. The vocal/beat combination will be very rhythmic.
In raps thats one of the most important things.

Not bad though i like the oldschool sound.


the echo on Kez's verse made it harder to understand, but i like his flow better.


thx for the feed :worship:
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Postby Enimee » Dec 27th, '06, 22:03

like the eminem style laugh at the end...lol nice try it was an ok track

bar was not so great wit his flow and kinda ruined the chorus for me

and kez was pretty alright minus the fact the echo wasnt to great...not for a whole song maybe parts, consider it

oh and bar on the chorus you sed "i spit a sick track and you spit one back"

well the last time you say it you actually say "i spic a sick trackand you spit one back" which you kinda did through the whole thing...you sounded mad nervous...


anyways it was good overall
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 29th, '06, 18:18

Sarah wrote:Late feed :sweating: sorry




Really like this track, you guys did well. Kez you got some mad flow ;)


thanks sarah :flower:

and thx for the feed enimee :8)
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Postby C-Game » Dec 29th, '06, 19:26

bar y da hell do u forget me
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