Desperation [IT Productions]

[Tash8]

Yo,

Our first production, Desperation... IT Productions is basically iceaxe and tash helping each other improve on our beats and we collab together to try to make our beats better, so the main reason we have done this is to support each other...

Desperation:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/21445231ec3e49/ - Low Quality
http://www.zshare.net/audio/2144540e0fd365/ - High Quality

IceAxe - Drum Pattern
Tash8 - All Else

propz to hadez for his support also

please feed,
tash8

[Hadez]

is there a reason why there's 3 minutes of nothing when its over?

[Tash8]

no didn't even notice, but whateva haha u can hear the first whatever seconds

i only put in one verse and the intro so it should be around 50 sec of shit

[Ethos]

Okay this is what I gotta say.
The concept would be great. but the melody is all screwed up.
It all just doesnt flow that well. the kicks work but you need to fix up the melody. maybe just a couple tweaks here and there will do. but just in case, wait till mart or DC come in with a review

[Tash8]

thanks propz for feed, i will sure wait for mart and dc their both real good producers

[mart85]

Okay this is what I gotta say.
The concept would be great. but the melody is all screwed up.
It all just doesnt flow that well. the kicks work but you need to fix up the melody. maybe just a couple tweaks here and there will do. but just in case, wait till mart or DC come in with a review

yeah he's right... the melody sounds a bit messy, there are too many notes that are not necessary to me, tweaking it a bit would help like Syanied said... and the drums, they sound good, but there's a part that is "off", it doesn't belong there... like, if you count the beat, or nod your head to the beat, you'll notice at some point, there's a part that sounds "out of place"... that part would make it harder to rap on it, and it would sound messy... if you try to adjust those things, it would be a nice little beat

keep it up

[Tash8]

thanks for the beat mart

i think the transition from ice's comp to mine fucked upt he drums a lil because, when he exported them it might of added a milisec extra and ruined the flow

thanks for feed again

[DC4952]

yea the melody needs to be fixed but other than that its good. u guys r improving, keep it up