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Bar & Tash beat Collab

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jun 20th, '07, 00:16

This Was Created approx. in 30 minutes or so including sending files over coz i used some sounds he didnt have and vice versa


ok well, i did the drum pattern then sent this to tash, he added the melody and switched the snare a little, he sent it back and i mixed it (my first beat mixing job so it wont be too good, but hopefully its ok)

This Is just a 16 bar loop of it, feed is highly appreciated :y:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/2344338bd5d067/


props to tash on collabing on the beat :worship:
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Re: Bar & Tash beat Collab

Postby IceAxe » Jun 20th, '07, 00:27

Ok, the drum pattern wasn't bad, but at some points the kicks felt kinda off or somethin

I liked the melody on this too...and the mixing wasnt all that bad I thought.
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Re: Bar & Tash beat Collab

Postby Tash8 » Jun 20th, '07, 00:29

IceAxe wrote:Ok, the drum pattern wasn't bad, but at some points the kicks felt kinda off or somethin

I liked the melody on this too...and the mixing wasnt all that bad I thought.
Keep workin at it, both of ya


thanks for the feed :sweating:
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Re: Bar & Tash beat Collab

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jun 20th, '07, 00:34

IceAxe wrote:Ok, the drum pattern wasn't bad, but at some points the kicks felt kinda off or somethin

I liked the melody on this too...and the mixing wasnt all that bad I thought.
Keep workin at it, both of ya



yeh, i took the EQ for the kick and tried to find the "sweet spot" you could say, so it was down to a un-expeirenced ear if it sounds off lol my bad

thanx for the feed :worship: :worship:
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Re: Bar & Tash beat Collab

Postby Hadez » Jun 20th, '07, 00:35

drum pattern was good from wut i could hear, propz bar. cant think of anything wrong with it so good job.

the melody.. umm, well it could get annoying hearing that through the whole thing, in my opinion. somethin i think u should think about when makin a melody (not just this one, with all of your melodies) is that when u make up a pattern, and it sounds cool n everything, u should ask yourself, "will this still be cool when its repeated for 3 minutes?"
or however long the song is. so maybe u should switch it up later in the beat, or have another little pattern join in at some point. that way its diverse and more enjoyable.
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Re: Bar & Tash beat Collab

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jun 20th, '07, 00:36

Hadez wrote:drum pattern was good from wut i could hear, propz bar. cant think of anything wrong with it so good job.

the melody.. umm, well it could get annoying hearing that through the whole thing, in my opinion. somethin i think u should think about when makin a melody (not just this one, with all of your melodies) is that when u make up a pattern, and it sounds cool n everything, u should ask yourself, "will this still be cool when its repeated for 3 minutes?"
or however long the song is. so maybe u should switch it up later in the beat, or have another little pattern join in at some point. that way its diverse and more enjoyable.


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Re: Bar & Tash beat Collab

Postby stevethetruth » Jun 20th, '07, 00:50

wasn't half bad really, it sounded like the chorus part of a beat but yeah good job guys better than what i could do
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Re: Bar & Tash beat Collab

Postby mart85 » Jun 20th, '07, 01:05

yeah it wasn't bad... the drum pattern "made sense" if I can say lol, I mean there was nothing wrong... personally I would have prefered a louder snare tho

and the melody was ok, like Hadez I think it would get kinda annoying for a whole beat tho... cause personally, I really didn't like the sound of that violin :sweating: but the melody itself wasn't bad

keep it up :y:
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Re: Bar & Tash beat Collab

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jun 20th, '07, 01:11

@ steve, thanx man :y:

@mart, thanx for the feed man :worship:
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Re: Bar & Tash beat Collab

Postby Tash8 » Jun 20th, '07, 01:14

thx for the feed guys

btw mart that violin is from no apologies lol, i was looking for a violin, it was the one i could find.
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Re: Bar & Tash beat Collab

Postby mart85 » Jun 20th, '07, 01:22

Tash8 wrote:thx for the feed guys

btw mart that violin is from no apologies lol, i was looking for a violin, it was the one i could find.


lol really? where did you get that? :sweating: I mean, it's a .wav sound or it's a soundfont?
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Re: Bar & Tash beat Collab

Postby Tash8 » Jun 20th, '07, 01:45

mart85 wrote:
Tash8 wrote:thx for the feed guys

btw mart that violin is from no apologies lol, i was looking for a violin, it was the one i could find.


lol really? where did you get that? :sweating: I mean, it's a .wav sound or it's a soundfont?


it's a soundfont, you want it :D?
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Re: Bar & Tash beat Collab

Postby IceAxe » Jun 20th, '07, 01:46

^ i want it
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Re: Bar & Tash beat Collab

Postby Tash8 » Jun 20th, '07, 01:50

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Re: Bar & Tash beat Collab

Postby IceAxe » Jun 20th, '07, 01:52

props :b:

i'll add this to the Samples thread i guess
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