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Can't Forget (new beat that could be used for the TR tape!)

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Can't Forget (new beat that could be used for the TR tape!)

Postby mart85 » Nov 28th, '07, 05:51

Hey, here's a new beat I made... it's a deep beat, with electric guitars in it and strings etc... Let me know what you think of it!

lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplaye ... 07643&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplaye ... 07643&q=hi

It's available for download, so if people wanna use it for the TR tape, just go to that thread and write that you wanna use it : http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=40937

(to download, go to http://www.soundclick.com/mart85)

thanks!
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Re: Can't Forget (new beat that could be used for the TR tape!)

Postby Tash8 » Nov 28th, '07, 07:02

i'd love to use it but i'd rather not and let someone more skilled :D

great job on the beat, like i said before.. very nice hook
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Re: Can't Forget (new beat that could be used for the TR tape!)

Postby Tomega » Nov 28th, '07, 15:23

very good produced,

didnt like the chorus melody though, but thats a matter of taste.. you really have the ear for producing..

good job
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Re: Can't Forget (new beat that could be used for the TR tape!)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Nov 28th, '07, 21:24

damn thatz a nice one...melody is beautiful :worship: and drumz are really strong but at the same time calme :y:
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Re: Can't Forget (new beat that could be used for the TR tape!)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Nov 28th, '07, 21:28

beats sick, the drums on it go really nice and are mixed perfectly to still feel smooth and hard at the same time, melodies are great aswell imo

as always sick beat man :y:
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Re: Can't Forget (new beat that could be used for the TR tape!)

Postby Ethos » Nov 29th, '07, 01:29

And this is why they called you that award on war beats. :worship:
i have nothing bad to say about this one cuz it's mixed perfectly. and I like that panning sound (i think it's a guitar) going around during the chorus. and the song very powerful and soothing too.
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Re: Can't Forget (new beat that could be used for the TR tape!)

Postby mart85 » Dec 1st, '07, 21:19

thanks for the comments everybody, I really appreciate it :worship: :worship: glad you liked it :happy:
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Re: Can't Forget (new beat that could be used for the TR tape!)

Postby randomghost » Dec 5th, '07, 06:41

drums really fits wid da melody..the melody is awesome...crazy beat man...nice work :y:
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Re: Can't Forget (new beat that could be used for the TR tape!)

Postby Jay_LP1 » Dec 8th, '07, 07:34

damn good beat man , one of ur best :worship: :worship: . But I think hook part is not meant for rappers. Coz it'll be really difficult to rap there . Singing will be better for the hook right?
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Re: Can't Forget (new beat that could be used for the TR tape!)

Postby GDBSB » Dec 8th, '07, 14:46

Y NOT TRY SOME BASE?
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Re: Can't Forget (new beat that could be used for the TR tape!)

Postby Tash8 » Dec 8th, '07, 20:25

McMaybe wrote:
GDBSB wrote:Y NOT TRY SOME BASE?



bass can either make or ruin a track. In this case, it will ruin it.


agreed, most emotional tracks, unless u get the bass perfect, it ruins it.
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Re: Can't Forget (new beat that could be used for the TR tape!)

Postby mart85 » Dec 8th, '07, 21:21

thanks for the comments everybody

but about the bass, there IS a deep bassline in the beat... obviously I can tell it cause I made the beat lol, but I think you might need a sub to hear it clearly... in this case, the bass really gives a deep feel (with a sub at least lol) and IMO without it, it would sound kinda empty :sweating: but yeah, I think making it more present or louder would take away from the rest of the beat and maybe ruin it

and obb... yeah, a usual rap verse during the hook part of the beat wouldn't be that good, but for a hook it's alright I think
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Re: Can't Forget (new beat that could be used for the TR tape!)

Postby GDBSB » Dec 16th, '07, 11:12

CAN i make a song with ur beat?? :flower:
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Re: Can't Forget (new beat that could be used for the TR tape!)

Postby C-Game » Dec 16th, '07, 11:38

dam this song has emotion written all over it
a gal on the hook can kill this..

excellent stuff man,,
and i dont think more bass is needed
but some strums of bass could have gone to the hook with the current bass ...

anyway its my opinion
sick as usual...
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